Paragraph #1 Score=
0
- I give this paragraph a 0 because although the writer used correct documentation there was no added value from writer’s commentary.
Paragraph #2 Score=2
- I give the paragraph a 2 because the writer paraphrased the source and correctly cited it. But the writer’s inclusion of the fact that George Washington was also a slave owner seems disjointed and misused.
Paragraph #3 Score= -1
- I give this paragraph a -1 because the writer did not use a clear in text citation for the original sources listed in their works cited. The writer only referred to the source in a vague and general manner of speaking.
Paragraph #4 Score= -3
- I give this paragraph a -3 because it sounds like the writer is summarizing the original source in a way to make the reader think it’s their own original writing. The writer did not include and citations.
Paragraph #5 Score= 4
- I give this paragraph a 4 because the writer correctly cited the source in the paragraph and in the works cited. The writer also successfully added their own ideas while keeping the original author’s ideas clearly cited and separated.
